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Amanda (User)
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I Miss You 2007/06/08 15:51  
I Miss You

I miss you,
And I don’t know why.
I feel so confused,
So torn up inside.
It makes me feel happy,
But sad at the same time.
I am so confused,
What should I do?
Should I go swim,
Take a run,
Ride a bike?
I don’t know.
You’ve got me all twisted.
I like you and I don’t know why.
This concludes to the fact,
That I miss you
And I don’t know why.
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Re:I Miss You 2007/06/09 00:24  
I liked the way the poem ended. I know that sounds weird, but I think it was clever.
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Re:I Miss You 2007/06/09 13:40  
Thank you... I wrote that almost 3 years ago and just found it on my computer so I thought I would get some imput on it... I don't think it's very strong though.,,
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Re:I Miss You 2007/06/09 20:00  
Nice poem! You're very talented.
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